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Post by steel_lily on Dec 18, 2004 19:01:27 GMT -5
I just wrote a new song! This one is far less likely to hit the top lists, but I like it!
"I take a minute and clear my head Try to remember all the things she said Earlier today It had been entirely too long Since we were together, since we heard the song Of each other's eyes.
Me and my clone, we're just like each other We love each other like sisters Well, my clone, she's a little older Two years or so But I'm not feelin that
I take off her hat, she's probly takin off mine I go to the 'puter and get online To our message board She posted somethin' 'bout my alter-ego I thought I made it clear tht that was a no-go Where's the bloody Coke bottle?
Chorus"
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Post by Alameth of the Iron Fist on Dec 19, 2004 7:28:12 GMT -5
I LOVE IT!
But then, of course, why wouldn't I?... Blast, I'm not at all good at writing songs.....
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Post by soldieroftruth on Dec 19, 2004 10:39:53 GMT -5
Either can I. The only thing i can do is sing songs. And whats with you guys saying "Blast" all the time... is it "your word" or something? j/w
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Post by Alameth of the Iron Fist on Dec 19, 2004 14:03:52 GMT -5
Yes it is. If you want to know where steel_lily got it from, ask her, but at your own risk. And if you do, don't say I didn't warn you. Because I did.
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Post by soldieroftruth on Dec 19, 2004 16:23:55 GMT -5
Ok... maybe i shouldn't then... i won't.
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Post by Alameth of the Iron Fist on Dec 19, 2004 16:25:10 GMT -5
Good. She'd probably do strange and undesirable things to you.
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Post by soldieroftruth on Dec 19, 2004 16:27:38 GMT -5
umm ok... glads i'm stuck elsewhere in this world.
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Post by Alameth of the Iron Fist on Dec 19, 2004 16:30:23 GMT -5
Where is 'elswhere'? If I might ask.... I understand if you don't want to be specific.... Just slight vagueness will do.
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Post by soldieroftruth on Dec 19, 2004 16:52:59 GMT -5
I live in the Rocky Mountain Region.
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Post by Mouche8 on Dec 19, 2004 19:49:32 GMT -5
Just to be a critic, why the rhyme most, but not all of the song? But it's all good. Dare I ask how exactly this Sacred Coke bottle came about? I've asked before, but didn't quite get it.
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Post by Alameth of the Iron Fist on Dec 19, 2004 20:48:26 GMT -5
It's a camp thing, Mouche. The Sacred Coke Bottle banishes Cecilia and Sofia. Unfortunately, steel_lily has it in her posession... So when I need it, I don't have it.
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Post by steel_lily on Dec 20, 2004 8:42:49 GMT -5
I used to live in the Rocky Mountain Region!!!! Cool! I miss the Rockies. I'm going back to Colorado for Christmas (see the calendar). The mountains rock.
And no, don't ask about 'Blast'. It's a long and gory story.
Mouche, I rhymed some but not the rest because it is a stylistic thing. If I sang it, It would sound better than it does on paper. Kind've.
Thank you all for the feedback. Songs like this just kind've hit me out of nowhere. I'm odd like that.
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Post by soldieroftruth on Dec 20, 2004 18:00:16 GMT -5
Yeah The Rockies rock!!! Colorado eh? ... hmm.
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Post by steel_lily on Dec 20, 2004 20:46:09 GMT -5
What portion of the Rocky Mountain region do you live in? (If you don't mind. I get it if you don't. I've taken off people's heads for asking my name.)
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Post by Mouche8 on Dec 20, 2004 21:41:17 GMT -5
Besides the fact it's really not paper...I was just trying to find a negative comment, since you scold me for always complimenting your work.
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Post by soldieroftruth on Dec 20, 2004 21:57:43 GMT -5
Well I'm gonna give you two states and you can guess but i will refuse to say any more than that... Colorado,or Wyoming
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Post by Alameth of the Iron Fist on Dec 21, 2004 8:23:32 GMT -5
I like Colorado...
Lass, don't say anything! I've been rather nice to you.... Kind've.
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Post by steel_lily on Dec 21, 2004 13:53:59 GMT -5
I like Colorado too. Though for diferent reasons. (Don't the mountains have beautiful scenery?)
I'm guessing CO.
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Post by soldieroftruth on Dec 21, 2004 14:31:54 GMT -5
Oh boy is it beautiful... I couldn't imagine being way from it.
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Post by Alameth of the Iron Fist on Dec 21, 2004 17:12:47 GMT -5
I've told steel_lily to pack me in that infitessimal space she keeps handy, but she can't seem to find it. So it looks like I won't be going to Colorado... Blast. COKE BOTTLE!!!!!!!!!
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Post by Mouche8 on Dec 21, 2004 18:43:56 GMT -5
*smiles mysteriously* Yes...mountains do have wonderful scenery.
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Post by Alameth of the Iron Fist on Dec 21, 2004 18:45:05 GMT -5
Yes. Scenery. Um...
COKE BOTTLE!!!!!!!!
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Post by Mouche8 on Dec 21, 2004 18:56:57 GMT -5
Ahh, I see.
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Post by Alameth of the Iron Fist on Dec 21, 2004 20:46:11 GMT -5
Yes, you're very smart. Shut up.
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Post by steel_lily on Dec 24, 2004 22:01:32 GMT -5
Mouche, you have no room to talk <cough> ADIRONDACKS! <cough>
It is wonderful to be back. The view this morning was gorgeous!
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Post by Alameth of the Iron Fist on Dec 25, 2004 9:12:38 GMT -5
I do so envy you.....
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Post by soldieroftruth on Dec 26, 2004 13:33:18 GMT -5
I see it every morning.
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Post by steel_lily on Dec 26, 2004 18:11:08 GMT -5
I do so envy you...
My dad and I were noting that since the "mountains" in the east were the first to be defined as mountains, then the Rockies should be called something different. Like "mountissimos" or "bulwarks". The term "mountains" just really doesn't do them justice.
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Post by soldieroftruth on Dec 26, 2004 22:01:14 GMT -5
Very true.
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Post by steel_lily on Dec 29, 2004 12:56:14 GMT -5
I just wrote part of another new song yesterday. I was wandering around around noon(mountain time) and it was beautiful out. Clear as can be. I was taking in the mountains, knowing that it would be the last time I would see them for a while. The red is the chorus.
"<color=red>To your glory, Lord I praise you. For your glory, Lord I lift up my hands. mmm mmm mmm To your glory, Lord I love you. For your glory, Lord I lift up my life. mmm mmm mmm</color>
As I stand Viewing the mountains. fashioned by your hand And I breathe The crisp, cool air That blows across the land It all sings Praises of your Majesty
And I can't help But love you.
<chorus>"
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