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Post by Alameth of the Iron Fist on May 13, 2005 15:23:17 GMT -5
I've gone and done it again--started something new! You can read the first part of Flickerings here. It's still under construction, but you'll get the basic idea. Now I want feedback! You can leave it here or there, I don't care. Just let me know what you think!
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Post by steel_lily on May 13, 2005 17:50:46 GMT -5
Nice, but cliche!
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Post by Alameth of the Iron Fist on May 13, 2005 17:51:15 GMT -5
Yes, it needs fixing.
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AI-C1
Mischievous Rascal
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Post by AI-C1 on Jun 5, 2005 22:45:51 GMT -5
It seems pretty good so far, but its a little early to tell.
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Post by Thenin on Jul 30, 2005 22:59:50 GMT -5
Good. Needs a bit of work, but you've got a good start here.
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