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Post by steel_lily on Feb 8, 2005 19:27:08 GMT -5
I wrote a new song this weekend. I really like it....maybe just because of the situation....
Then I Step Back
When I look at this world I see pain...and darkness Why does it have to be? Oh Lord, that's the question: Why? We all ask in times if fear, And though you're always near, We don't know why.
But then I step baaaaack Behind all the pain Behind all the tears I see your face, Lord you're always near You're better than I know You're better than I know
When we look at world We can only see the cloud But you are above all time Past...future...and now So I just pray Somehow...someday We can see it
{Chorus}
How can we doubt your love your promise? How can we doubt your truth? But then we are human, as you made us I just try to be like you....
{Chorus}
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Post by Alameth of the Iron Fist on Feb 8, 2005 22:36:37 GMT -5
Very good. I like it muchly. ;D
Why must I be deprived of such a talent?? Alas. Ah, well, I shall content myself with my other writing.
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Post by steel_lily on Feb 9, 2005 9:33:04 GMT -5
Talent? I'm not really good at it. I'm just very prolific. Write enough, and odds are one will be acceptable.
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Post by ElementFire on May 14, 2005 16:15:07 GMT -5
I love it!!!! I'm sorry, pretty songs always make me cry...
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Post by steel_lily on May 18, 2005 7:52:05 GMT -5
Aww...thanks.
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